Feedback on Rough-Cut

After showing the rest of the class the rough cut for Ellipsis, our opening sequence to a thriller, we recieved the following feedback:
- To make all scenes black and white, where some where still coloured.
- To change certain parts of the music so that it fitted better with the images.
- That we should possibly add some more shots better explaining the plot, however this is impossible but we can re-edit the scene to give it the desired clarity.
- To add diegetic sounds (for example a can opening).
- Above all we must add the remaining titles.